Ending change.

He is casting away in the river and then he realizes that there is something glittering on the end of his line. He realizes that it is something that is a round metal piece then he comes to the realization that it is a ring. Linda was astonished as she shouted out I can't believe you found my ring. Greg was in disbelief as he said '' this is truly the catch of a life time''. Linda replied and said "this is awkward because I thought that this was a sign to get back together with Michael". Greg replied with an "o" and she ran off and he never saw her again!

What I want to write about!!

Personally I would like to write about random creative topics. I would also like to have the topics left more open ended so you dont feel like you are writing something that someone else has has already written about. The super power paragragh was exactly what I was looking for. I find that if the topic is creative it insipires me to come up with somthing new and original. My opinion on this topic today is that it is very bland and not intreging what so ever. I would rather write about who would win in a fight Batman or Superman! My views on how this should be marked is on a compleation mark and a creativity mark.

Byron's super power!!

If I could have any super power I would want to be able to control machines with your mind. With this the possibilities are endless, you can get your car to fix itself or tell an ATM to give you 500 dollars. You could quite possibily take over the world. Not that I would though, because it could be used for many things to help the world. One of the first things I would do would to be to disable all the guns in the world except for a special few for emergencies. I would also shut down all the computers in Princess Margret Secondary right now so I would'nt have to be doing this.